I made a new first page for the story because I wanted to do a proper title and fix some other things I didn’t like…

1 Thought on “Third Act – revised Page 1”

  1. Cheeky use of the Mac red, yellow, green buttons on your Windows machine Zoom window. I don’t know if this was simply you cutting and pasting a computer screen and you missed it, or you did it to see who would notice. I’m betting it’s the latter choice, as you don’t miss much.

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